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16 March 2008 @ 11:13 pm
Men in Uniform, Torchwood, John/Ianto, PG-13  
Title: Men in Uniform
Author: valderys
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: John/Ianto, mentions of Jack/Ianto, Jack/John
Word Count: 3,393
Spoilers: Up to 2.01 Kiss Kiss, Bang Bang
Summary: Captain John has a lot of time to kill in Cardiff. At least it’s only time.

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Kenaz: Torchwood: Ianto1kenazfiction on March 18th, 2008 07:05 pm (UTC)
Fantastic! Easily one of the best John voices I've come across-- the perfect balance of alluring and obscene. God, what a delicious bastard!

Any chance of a sequel? This is just begging for it!
Valderys: Captain John - did I mention I'm armed?valderys on March 20th, 2008 05:37 pm (UTC)
Isn't he gorgeous? I had to carefully go through the fic and try and limit my use of the word 'fun' - John did seem to want to be using it constantly... :)

And there might be a sequel but I don't want to promise - I'll see if those bunnies of plot bite hard enough.
phineyjphineyj on March 19th, 2008 09:53 pm (UTC)
somehow Owen has managed to use up all their string, although Ianto refuses to ask how. (intriguing thoughts of Owen with nefarious/obscene uses for string)

It’s as though he’s alone under a crushing burden no-one else can see. He’s going through the motions, but he can’t do anything else. As though he can’t even see what else there is to do. He’s a cipher, a glyph. The invisible man. A statue. I loved that - great analysis of his state of mind.

The Carer might do, or more enticingly, her beautifully solid boyfriend John's descriptions are great.

This is a wonderful, well-written piece that catches John perfectly in all his repellent attraction. How about an X-rated sequel?
Valderys: Captain John - did I mention I'm armed?valderys on March 20th, 2008 05:41 pm (UTC)
Love your icon! And there might be a sequel but I don't know how smutty it will be - it ought to be, of course, but I am not the writer for that, I'm afraid :) (My smut always comes across as too embarrassed, basically)

But thank you for your lovely comment - and the description of Ianto's state of mind? A friend of mine describing depression to me. I am lucky in never having felt that way myself, I think.
phineyjphineyj on March 20th, 2008 09:34 pm (UTC)
Ah, I'm sure the inner smut goddess is in there somewhere! I've always found smut works much better when it's not too explicit, anyway. And the icon is by geordie_star, who is very funny indeed (have you been reading her 'Owen's diary'?)
mjzjewel: huh? Iantomjzjewel on March 21st, 2008 09:31 pm (UTC)
I loved it! I really want to read more of this.
Valderys: Captain John - did I mention I'm armed?valderys on July 11th, 2008 11:20 am (UTC)
Oh, I missed replying to a comment! Very sorry! Thank you - and yes, Captain John will be getting an outing or two in the future. Absolutely!
jackaronojackarono on July 4th, 2008 11:00 pm (UTC)
Lovely... who can it hurt? Oh, ianto, don't ask that!!!
Valderys: Captain John - did I mention I'm armed?valderys on July 11th, 2008 11:22 am (UTC)
Hee. It's only a problem if Jack finds out, really. And even then... Well, Jack was off with the Doctor, so he can't, in fairness, complain... :)
way_to_the_endway_to_the_end on September 13th, 2010 01:04 am (UTC)
I have to say that John/Ianto is my guilty pleasure and you wrote this very very well. You can feel the emotion in Ianto and John is as bad as in the show :D